She is young and sweet and I love her dear, she is my little sister, my second gear. Her name is Amber like the color of fall, she was there with me throughout it all. When we were young she danced on my nerves, but when I grew patience, I longed for her words. We laugh and we cry and we talk to each other, we are fair skinned and blue eyed, just like our mother. She is there when I am sick and there when I am sad, we say silly things that no one else understands. Why did I write this for a dear little sister? 'Cause when she's asleep, even then I miss her.
Very nice tribute here... now, make sure you show this to her! Very nice lines here:
When we were young she danced on my nerves,
but when I grew patience, I longed for her words.
and this ending is oh so sweet:
Why did I write this for a dear little sister?
'Cause when she's asleep, even then I miss her.
you and your sister are blessed to have each other... A very nice write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
We are very very blessed, we are as close as the best of friends. We just have the privilege of bein.. read moreWe are very very blessed, we are as close as the best of friends. We just have the privilege of being related. :)
Very nice tribute here... now, make sure you show this to her! Very nice lines here:
When we were young she danced on my nerves,
but when I grew patience, I longed for her words.
and this ending is oh so sweet:
Why did I write this for a dear little sister?
'Cause when she's asleep, even then I miss her.
you and your sister are blessed to have each other... A very nice write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
We are very very blessed, we are as close as the best of friends. We just have the privilege of bein.. read moreWe are very very blessed, we are as close as the best of friends. We just have the privilege of being related. :)
My name is Shawna, I love writing and expressing the random thoughts and ideas in my head. I look forward to reading as many poems as I can, and I also look forward to people reading mine and offering.. more..