Best friend

We would always play together as

we were kids we would always look after for

one another.But as we grew up

we started to dirft upart until

fianlly you left.But

you and said you promise

that you would be back.But

from that I day on I never saw

you again.But I still call

you my best friend.

 

Reviews

[Collette]

I agree with the review below me: the simplicity of this poem works. You don't need elaborate language or complicated stanzas to express this sort of love. Friendship is all enduring, and in the end it will always remain. I enjoyed your style; the continuous lines worked wonders for the poem. Loved the topic, loved the piece. Nice job!

[Jason Grey]

I love how simplistic yet emotional this poem is. It dictates a story but there is a whole story under it. Good work.