SpoonMan

Its getting late,
and yet I wait.
Behind the alleyway

I don't fit in,
and yet I blend
with the rest of the litter

I am here
to disappear
and escape the invisible

I used to dream
and now I scheme
it makes me feel invincible

Oh here he comes
I should run
but my fear makes me stay

it hurts to much
to not hurt
there is no other way

heres 10 bucks
wish me luck
this time could be the one

if im not back
when you read this
it means im finally done

Reviews

[CURETONTAX]

REDISCOVER THE LIGHT

[Circe]

Interesting piece... a little foreboding... something about fear that makes us react unexpectedly... we don't always predict it... "I used to dream and now I scheme it makes me feel invincible" that's a nugget of honesty right there not easily admissible.

[Everett DeValle]

I enjoyed the diction of your write...it flowed so well. :)