The Web Of Lies

The title is pretty self explanatory.

A series of 

rotten words spoken

only for

self-interest

So often spoken

and so often

believed

 by the 

weak-minded

Words I used 

to believe

Words you spoke

to me

Words you left 

me with

 

But I am

strong

I will not let

these insignificant

sentences

fool me

I will not let you

fool me again

with your wretched

lies

Author's Note

Please fill me in with what you think of my writing!

Reviews

[ANTO]

It's not so much eloquent as it is powerful - I mean it doesnt roll off the tongue but it ceratinly is powerful and direct - almost like a speech from G.O.T. I would imagine.
A good start indeed.

[ignited_soul]

Thank you! I will work on making my future poems more eloquent.