FIGURE OF MY HOPE

Because when i lay in the canopy of stars at night, it mystifies me ......

I often wonder

Why it shines,

In shadow of a big brother,

Yet its light rhymes!

I can see it, so does he,

Who sits far away.

Never its beauty disintegrates,

What happens is event: Day!

I often wonder

Is it physiognomy of hope?

It is dark everywhere,

Yet its bright cope!

It is a guide

To a lost man,

And forever roof,

To a wandering clan!

I often wonder

What does it tell?

It tells me to live

With smile even in hell!

Oh yes! I took a heart

From what shines even in dark,

If someday it is missing,

I imagine in sky, a spark!

 

Author's Note

It is a small tribute to the most inspirational thing in my life..!!

Reviews

[AnonymousOne]

This was really something!! :D I like it.

[costa siwale]

Like you said, inspirational, wonderful piece, beautiful

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thank you Costa Siwale. :D

[nibhz]

a lovely poem indeed! (y)

[Vidushi Sharma]

thank you di

[Pryde Foltz]

A promise of the coming day. Loved the lilting and magical sense of this poem. It made me think and ponder.

[Vidushi Sharma]

Yes!! even i at times gets mesmerized how some simple words can display some internal emotions!! read moreYes!! even i at times gets mesmerized how some simple words can display some internal emotions!!
thank you for reading!!

[wordwarrior]

Such a lovely and inspirational poem, especially your ending.
Enjoyed this!

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thank you wordwarrior!! :D

[Latifa]

really nice poem i like it

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thank you Latifa!! i aspire to write more!! :D

[Sami Khalil]

"I took a heart

From what shines even in dark,

If someday it is missing,

I imagine in sky, a spark!"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thank you...! Frankly this is how i spend my time...i love to watch stars!! :D

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful. You are welcome...:)