In Between Each Second

In Between Each Second

A Poem by Sharkapillar

Rain weaves in between each second to find room to assault me.
And in between each raindrop, and each second, there is a thought.
And in between each purposeful thought, my mind wanders.
And in between each wandering step my mind takes, a thought happens.
And in between the steps and thoughts, there are small seconds.
And in between each second, a raindrop falls...

© 2011 Sharkapillar


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Beautiful poetry here...rain covers the tears of our soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really excellent work...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love Love Love!!! So beautiful
Potent and delicious.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing write, i like it very much, it is gentle, but not too much as to be boring, i like the repitition well done, great writing. keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this a lot Sharkapillar. You did a fantastic job. I loved the last line.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sharkapillar
Sharkapillar

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