F**K.

F**K.

A Poem by Sharkapillar
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Frustration.

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F**K.

© 2011 Sharkapillar


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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


O.o Well, it's sure to go over big with everyone.
Thanks for sharing. O.o
~S. D. Blankenship

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BEST. POEM. EVER.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The title gave away the ending lol. This was good. Made me chuckle a bit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ha. I'm a visual guy, so I like a lot about this. Maybe you should think about doing this on a white t- shirt with red lipstick and wearing it around the mall...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can relate to that at the moment.

Posted 13 Years Ago


That one word is so defined in way of current emotion. It can sum up a person's day, night or anytime.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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two thumbs way way up

Posted 13 Years Ago


Certainly illustrates the depth and meaning of the word, on all levels in its bloodiest form. I can see how "Frustration" fits nicely with this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the added punctuation really supports the sentiment, letting all who read know there is absolutely nothing more to be said on the subject.
the underlining is just perfect as well, and it leaves the fact that the period is underlined too up for interpretation. depending on the situation it may be over emphasizing the sentiment or it be trying to get across that there's no hope for someone to understand the seriousness of it.
i'm enjoying the colour too, i would have expected you to go with a darker, more crimson shade of red to bring in the idea of blood, but this is almost has an upbeat feel since it's so vibrant. however, it does certainly resemble the colour of all those signs i see while driving... i think they tell me to stop but i never have enough time to read them. so if that's the case, this could be trying to say "stop! f**k." and the punctuation at the end wouldn't leave anything up for argument. and the font! perfect choice! the straight lines leading to sharp corners leading to a sense of violence - great! the easy, steady, consecutive curves of the two center letters also point to simplicity, like there's no need to over analyze or read into this so much, that it's just as it seems - one word with one little dot, on top of a little plain of existence...
oh... right... S**T.
haha i definitely enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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