Don't Forgive Me

Don't Forgive Me

A Poem by Sharkapillar
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Dean, I swear to God I cannot WAIT to get over this goddamn infatuation. You are a pain in the a*s.

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I said I was sorry.
I don't know what I did,
Still, I'm sorry for it.
Don't forgive me...
If you don't forgive me, you can't forget me.

© 2011 Sharkapillar


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I like this. Infatuation is what we all cling to to ignore the painful truth that we have never been in love, or been loved, in our whole lives (at least for me.) Then that moment of truth, the moment that you know you've never known love, stares you in the face, and if you can accept it you'll immediately get stronger with a moment of clarity--that's how most guys like me learn how to become loners. We simply learn to be at peace with our own solitude, and live on. I read your other poems and I like the feel of them; I can even identify with a few

Posted 13 Years Ago


That last line is amazing... makes you wonder, would you rather be hated by someone you love or completely forgotten?

Anyway, yeah. This is good. Keep it up. x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like the last line! Powerful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that last line. If you don't forgive me, you can't forget me. Beautiful and meaningful and full of sadness.
I might make that my personal motto, haha...
But no jokes. Sad, beautiful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sharkapillar
Sharkapillar

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