He Never Wrote One for Me.

Dominic.

It's a slap in the face to know that you're less
Nothing but your loved one's second best
She took his heart and snapped it in two
And still it's all her and the runner up is you
He wrote, and still writes for her, songs and poetry
And I think to myself..."He never wrote one for me."

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Whatajoikhuh? :)

Don't feel bad, no one who's ever sincerely cared for me ever wrote me one too... kinda sucks, but then not everyone has word with way like I do, wait, huh?

Seriously, hang in there okay... hey, funny profile picture... in a good way.
:)

[highthought]

and i think to myself what a wonderfull (nah a strange ) world

[Scott Christian]

Usually there's a good reason why they're "Exes". It's just sad when people cannot let go and give someone new (and most likely better) a chance. Still, at least you're able to see how worthless they are to you and not be tied down to someone undeserving of your time.

Been there.

In only 6 lines you capture pretty much everything that is frustrating about people who cannot let go of the past and move on with their future. Bravissimo.

[Brandon]

Wow, i just noticed that, this is deep. Keep up the good work and hope your doing good.


100,000,000,000,000,000,000 / 100

[Alexander Loux]

wow. very emotional. I love your rhythm here and the message is very clear. Very raw. I look forward reading more of yours.

[Diomaz]

Wow, nice use of ryhming, good technique you have here, seems somewhat relatble to me so double kudos! :3