He Never Wrote One for Me.

Dominic.

It's a slap in the face to know that you're less
Nothing but your loved one's second best
She took his heart and snapped it in two
And still it's all her and the runner up is you
He wrote, and still writes for her, songs and poetry
And I think to myself..."He never wrote one for me."

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Whatajoikhuh? :)

Don't feel bad, no one who's ever sincerely cared for me ever wrote me one too... kinda sucks, but then not everyone has word with way like I do, wait, huh?

Seriously, hang in there okay... hey, funny profile picture... in a good way.
:)

[Hello, Goodbye]

nice usage of brevity here..

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I like this. I write for someone all the time and I don't know if I could take him writing about me all the time. Yes those words are lovely but sometimes they are sharper than a knife. Well done.........

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I hope you find someone to write a special poem my friend.

[Jesse N. Wall]

well done. you hit that feeling in the face

So sad, it hurts when guys use you like that. But you deserve better, so don't let it get you down!
I loved the line...
She took his heart and snapped it in two
! Totally felt that one, great write!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I truly enjoyed this poem. Short yet intense.

"He wrote, and still writes her songs and poetry
And I think to myself..."He never wrote one for me."

Love it - !

Chloe

[Libby]

Really good, I can really relate-unfortunately. :c

[Alicia™]

Nobody is second best, because everyone is different. You're a very special person who deserves more than him.

[Jane Doe]

:( i know how you feel Domino he keeps going after the one that hurts hisheart i hope he learns eventually....
Hope you found someone new to love you and for you to love too,
For I am in love deeply and he wouldn't hurt me and when he does u'll know

1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000/10
-abbie:)