Unaccepted, Unwanted

I wrote this in the car on the way home from school...I've been feeling pretty down. My writings have really been sucking lately.

Pushed away...I'm on the outside
Unaccepted
Unwanted
So condescending...

I'm not inferior.
I'm not superior.
But I'm not your equal.

I'm a sub-race...too different...Nobody.

I'm nothing like you. Like anyone...
There's no one like me...

I'm a freak...
A freak, a freak....
An alien...
Outcast, ostracized,
Isolated....
Pushed away, I'm on the outside....
Unaccepted
Unwanted.

Reviews

[Samantha]

I loved this. I feel like you wrote this about me. Good job. I loved reading this

[~Lizzy♬]

This is not bad at all! This poem is a beautiful piece of writing, sad though.

~Lizzard~

[Gheeneil]

We all had this moment. We could definitely relate. I believe this was a sort of rant. Keep writing.

[Bella-Marie]

Oh, that's sad. How come you're so down? What a way to let out the sadness though, in a very well-written poem. Sometimes poems written in a way that is different makes it even better. And I think this is a time. I like it very much.