Whole

creative writing assignment..."story poems"...it's a little hard to follow, deal.

She'd walk alone and tears would fall
Feeling like nobody cared at all
She had one friend, her Other Half
Who left her choking on the aftermath
Birthed from this volatile friendship was a perfect pair
A replacement Half to fix this girl's tears
The friend helped it happen...but left it in the dust
Betraying our heroine's unconditional trust
But now there's no heartache, no pain, no tears
She's found a new Half to love her for years
To hold her, to love her, to fix up her soul...

I don't walk alone because now I'm not a Half...
But a Whole.

Author's Note

It's about how I met my boyfriend. <3

Reviews

[ATG]

This is really good. I got that you were talking about a relationship. I like the concept of someone finding their other half to make them whole. Metaphorically of course.

[Jonathan *break away*]

i love it! such a great story to tell with an awesome rhyme pattern

you are just the best!!

[Aimee Mahathy]

Oh this is really good! :D And what a great story it tells too. :3