Simple Observation

When we win we smile
When we lose we cry
When we shoot we triumph
And when we're shot we die

When we kiss we remember
When we fall we feel
When life is good we're happy
But otherwise we have to deal.

When we love we cry
When we hate we're still
When we starve we take less
But feast after our fill

I love you but you've ruined me
I hate you but I can't live without
I need you but I didn't before
I trust you yet I doubt

You love me but I corrupted you
You hate me but won't admit it
You need me but you didn't before
You'd leave me but I won't permit it.

Humans are strange creatures.

Reviews

[Nate E. Flake (Cösmic ..]

Yes indeed they are strange! I like how the structure is different to this one, being because of the limited words on each line! I like this one!

[LivingDeath]

This is an amazing poem Rabbit. Full of emotion from the past to the present. But then again all your poems are full of emotion. You are a very skilled writer. You could go far with it some day. I'm sorry.
Good Write
~Tyler

[Jane Doe]

uh huh girlfran! :P
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
-lil sis yo!