Hiding Places

Written while sitting in a tree, realizing that getting up was easier than getting down

I climbed this here tree
So that I wouldn't be found
I'm much too high up
To make my way down
I hid under the sea's surface
So as not to be found
I was so busy hiding,
I forgot not to drown
I tunneled beneath the Earth,
So that no mortal could find me
The Earth, it caved in then
As I was unskillfully hiding
I lived to see so much
And they all manage to find me
So I've decided to run away
And leave them all behind me.

Hiding does not work so I shall leave them all behind me.

Reviews

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"Hiding does not work so I shall leave them all behind me."

...love this ending line--great poetry!!!

james:-)

[Brandon]

i liked this one a ton great work

[Alex Luna]

Like it really good.

it's bloody impossible to move on, didn't you know?

I continue to adore your rhyme schemes.

[Bella-Marie]

I liked this poem, it had an excellent finish. XD