With All My Heart

;) a very heartfelt poem

It was you, who

Who made me fall apart

You built me high up off the ground

And turned around and tore me down

And I hate you with all my heart

You can act really well

“Love” blinded me from seeing

Pretended like you were there

And like you cared

And I hate you with ever fiber of my being

Yeah, I point my finger!

You dug out this deep hole

You're the one who's to blame

You should be ashamed

And I hate you with all my soul

Author's Note

strange rhyme scheme, i know...
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Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This was a great rant.. full of emotion on so many levels. Who hasn't blamed someone at some point in life. This left the feeling of being rescued,lifted and dropped at a very high peak .. I've been there once or twice and we fool ourselves that others will be beside us forever.. I no longer believe in forever and I'm not sad about it.. I'm actually happier not having mountainous expectations. Love what energy you did put into this.. great work!

[Bella-Marie]

It might be strange, but I like it. A powerful, angry poem. Good wokrk.