fAiLuRe

fAiLuRe

A Poem by Sharkapillar
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A random acrostic. idk. it has no meaning, really, it's just words on a screen.

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Finding faults in all I do

A disaster that won't be still

I am worthless, useless so I feel

Loved but not loving, loving but not loved

Under six feet of soil

Regret--that's what I am

Eternity--I must spent eternity as this...

© 2010 Sharkapillar


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I really hope that is just words on a screen and you don't feel like this . If you do i just want you to know that you can always find someone who cares with just a little searching and the people who care are usually the one you would least expect. This poem is really good. It shows the feeling that you're trying to portray in such a perfect yet simplistic fashion. I love it

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really hope that is just words on a screen and you don't feel like this . If you do i just want you to know that you can always find someone who cares with just a little searching and the people who care are usually the one you would least expect. This poem is really good. It shows the feeling that you're trying to portray in such a perfect yet simplistic fashion. I love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this though. I really liked this poem though. I can relate as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sharkapillar
Sharkapillar

Red-Light District



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