Heartbreakers from Hell

Thanks for making me feel special

Like I was the one who held your heart

For acting like she was nothing

For caring when I fell apart

 

You really knew how to make me smile

You could act quite well

You're what Mama tells me to look out for

Those heartbreakers from hell

 

Thanks for sitting still

For being the center of my life

Modeling for my poetry

And causing me this strife

 

I thought you were so different

I thought you were so sweet

I flew into irrational passion

No conscience to be discreet

 

I've already walked away

My head is moved on and could care less

But honestly, I'm not sure

If I can put my love to rest.

Reviews

[Kia-chan!]

I honestly love this poem. I really do. It speaks to the reader, and captures the reader. I cannot find a single flaw, and I love it. I like your style, so keep writing, cause, your going places.

[Amy]

this is truely amazing
i love it
makes so much sense and tells a story
great, fnatastic and wonderful :)