Still Can't...

Still Can't...

A Poem by Sharkapillar
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Written during my creative writing class, my teacher told me to write a random poem to stave off writer's block

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I cannot be cowardly, no running away

Still can't find the strength to just turn my face

 

It's nice to have goals, it's nice to claim boundaries

But I need to learn that this place does not revolve around me

 

I know I'm fake and fake's taking its toll

My plans backfire, new happiness grown old

 

I used to love always having my way

That New Happiness is going gray...

© 2010 Sharkapillar


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This is gorgeous. So much feeling put into such simple, flowy lines. I like it, I like it a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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A good way to get rid of that writer's block (are you sure you even had it? coz this piece is really nice.. ) :D Cant wait to read what you write after this !!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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loved this! one of my favs by you!

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