Gray Skies

I know it hurts

I'm hurting too

My dear, I know

What you're going through

 

Death isn't an option, dear

Not when you have Happiness near

 

There are are many words

That rhyme with "suicide"

"Parricide", "patricide", "cyanide"

Also "decide"

 

So decide what in life is important to you

Good things will overrun bad, 'tis true

 

You may not see it now

But you will someday

She's simply not worth it

Your skies won't always be gray.

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

I like how the last line kinda sums up the poem and they really are words to live by. "You skies won't always be gray" its true that tough times wont last forever. Im a perfect example. I went from suicidal to happy as a fat kid with ice cream lol good write :)

[Eric Cox]

Very cool write. So positive and well crafted.

[Tina Kline]

Nice poem giving great advice to someone hurting. Hope they hear your kind words.