In Memory

In memory of my friend John.

Happy?

To me, you look rather jaded.

I'm not expert,

But I believe this "cure" is overrated.

 

Five years!

Five long, long years of knowing you.

They're gone now

You've been replaced by someone new.

 

Cat?

Dearest, you don't even have a cat.

That's no cat scratch,

I know better than that.

 

Lies!

No one in your house smokes.

Why do you smell like tobacco?

What happened to my John, who'd smile, laugh, and joke?

 

...

...

...

...

 

...Gone?

He's gone?

He killed himself?

How could you do this to me, John?

 

......Gone...?

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

I feel for you rabbit, i think alot of people can relate to this. I know I can. Good but sad write

[-TweetyBirdd.!-]

This has a lot of emotion behind it, and kindof a story. I really like it, and yeahh, ive used the "cat" excuse a few times..guilty. Great poem, though. (:

[Dittobug]

This made me sad because of how true it is. The emotion is this is strong. And I'm sending you 100 e-hugs, just because.