love and beauty

honestly not in the mood for writing.

your hand holds my jaw,

in my eyes you gazed and saw-

my past that has scared me,

the future- how I want it to be,

and you see..

the closer you look into my ocean,

the cast away look on my face,

the more you realize you're the one,

the one saves me in this case..

I love you deep,

I love you blind,

I love you dirt cheap,

I love you so kind..

and I feel that if I try harder,

I will keep you longer,

I will love you deeper,

and I will keep you safer,

then anyone has ever tried.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ayele marie dalmeida]

Oh my god! This is one of the best piece I've ever read, love the easy flowing of the work and the truthfulness and gentleness that you put into this . I love this lots. Great job👌❤❤❤❤😊
"I love you deep
I love you blind
I love you dirt cheap
I lover you so kind.."
"I'LL keep you longer
I will love you deeper
And I will keep you safer
then anyone has ever tried"
I love those line the best . Such sweetness, such loving words . Amazing😃

[Wynd Wolf]

very moving.. I liked how you expressed yourself and kept the words in rhyme..