Akemi polino~Sharaya Polino~

Days go by, i get old.

 Time goes by, and im still alone.

 In my mind im with you,

 but in reality i miss you.

 i stop to think of were you could be,

 are you near me,

 or in open sea.

 You know that ill always love you,

 to bad your not hear so i could show you.

 You mean so much to me, i want to show you what

 i can truly be....Well lets see.

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

the poem is really good but
I'm a little bit curios about the title
=]

[Akemi Polino]

the title?

[CHRIS ANDES]

hahaha,I mean what could be its english counterpart =]

[Akemi Polino]

That's my name..?? Lol

[DontBlink158]

really great, it had i nice flow and i like the last line the best. A nice closer/opener for something else

[NeonWolves]

I like it. The spelling in some spots though, could use some tweeking. All around though, this is a fantastic poem.
By the way, love how Sebastian is the picture~ xD

[Kiari Sabon]

love it