"That she is me"

You took her heart once, then you let it fall to the ground. She had
your heart now its fading away with no sound. Her soul is dying to know
that she cant have you, now she is depressed and her head is always
down. When she cry's you know your on her mind, she loved you so much but
now she wants to die. She is afraid if she looks up she might want to
keep trying to capture him. She already fell in love. When she fell in
love she couldn't turn back, but i guess some how she is going to have to
leave this hell, and give up on love because she could never tell...

Reviews

[Akemi Polino]

thank you!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Nice work Akemi.
A little story with a moral....

[Kiari Sabon]

i have been here it sucks but good write