Sensibility Untouch

We can only grasp what is only now.

Beyond existence,
a narrow persistence awaits,
genuinely mislead, anxiously,
roughly, wearing insidiously,
perfect for nonchalant deeds.

Reviews

[GalaxyGhost]

There is nothing yet everything that it is overwhelming.

[John]

Thanks GalaxyGhost!

[GalaxyGhost]

You're welcome! Kumusta from Utah! (I'm also Filipino, but I moved to the states.)

[John]

oh my! okay lang ako! ehehehe... Feeling poet! Diyan na family u?

[GalaxyGhost]

Yes, I have family here. I speak very little Tagalog & Hiligaynon. I understand it though.

[SariahM]

short but long is a word, hard to comprehend what is being said, and in that way, perfect.

[John]

Thanks SariahMartineau! Appreciate much!

[SariahM]

:) no problem

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest, direct and nice use of words and thoughts. Thank you John for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[John]

You are most welcome Cayote!

[Shannon Carinne Sparks]

I enjoyed your poem, John. It seems to describe beautifully the point just before creation.

[John]

Thanks Shannon!