I wish you knew

Just a quick poem I wrote the other day

I wish you knew~

the pain you put me through.

I wish you could~

return all the minutes wasted on you.

I wish I could~

remove the emptiness your love left me with.

I wish I could~

just forget everything about you.

Run away~

Return my love~

Make me forget~

How simply powerless~

A broken heart can be.

I wish you knew~

only sadness and solitude.

I wish I could~

fell more then sadness and solitude.

Author's Note

just looking for general opinions if any want to provide

Reviews

[Just Kim]

I can feel this write.
nicely done

[SilentScreamingTears]

While the poem is quick, it speaks a lot of pain and hardship over much time; something I could use to describe almost everyone in my life. This is well done.