All of Me
A Poem by
Jaded Perception
i give
u win
im done
nothing left
u killed
my soul
drained me dry
just a whisper
left behind.
© 2008 Jaded Perception
Reviews
Very nicely done.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Minimalistic.
Yet says so much.
Well done.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Minimalistic.
Yet says so much.
Well done.
A shadow in a silhouette. Very well done. Like the format of it as well. Gives it an "almost there in the corner of one's eye" look and feel. Kudos.
Posted 16 Years Ago
A shadow in a silhouette. Very well done. Like the format of it as well. Gives it an "almost there in the corner of one's eye" look and feel. Kudos.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Woah you packed the punch that bad love will do to you in such few words, Damn this is terrific though sad.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Woah you packed the punch that bad love will do to you in such few words, Damn this is terrific though sad.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 7, 2008
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Jaded Perception CA
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We are all taken by novelty and think we have had it rough
My blades are dull suppressed by the hard edges its cut.
Busy spending my money on cheap things that break, like
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