All of Me

All of Me

A Poem by Jaded Perception

 

 

i give

 

u win

 

im done

 

nothing left

 

u killed

 

my soul

 

drained me dry

 

just a whisper

 

left behind.

© 2008 Jaded Perception


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Very nicely done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Minimalistic.
Yet says so much.

Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A shadow in a silhouette. Very well done. Like the format of it as well. Gives it an "almost there in the corner of one's eye" look and feel. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woah you packed the punch that bad love will do to you in such few words, Damn this is terrific though sad.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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