The Seductress pillow

The Seductress pillow

A Poem by Ashwin Shanker
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Born to tempt, till the day we sleep

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Tempted

It’s the silence that follows the alarm

An awkward silence

A lapse in judgment

A whisper, you get closer

The moment you close your eyes

To its soft bosom

You feel you’re going home to your dreams again

Beware, it’s a seductress pillow

It puts you back to sleep, so slow

What is happening to you, you wouldn’t know

Cheating on your early-morning commitments

You decide to sleep with the seductress pillow

© 2017 Ashwin Shanker


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Ashwin Shanker
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Ah the temptress pillow eh, wow a creative metaphor idea poet. Great poem, soulful a bit and expressed swell. Kudos.

I'm a newbie here, pleez do review, comment my first poem here, wud luv to know your thoughts, I'm navigating the site looking for poetic interaction,

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashwin Shanker

6 Years Ago

Will do Zaynab



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You did this story well in all aspects of writing for me, entertaining plus.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashwin Shanker

6 Years Ago

Thank you Andrew
wow. you're a great writer

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashwin Shanker

6 Years Ago

Thank you Gabija
Same as other reviewer, I too am a victim to my pillow. I hit snooze way too many times.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I just love this one! I'm more a victim of insomnia myself. I'll wear myself to a frazzle sometimes before I reach the bed...drives my wife crazy. I might be up at 3 am writing or washing dishes. She's like, "I was going to get those"...I know but
I 'm just trying to use up some of my boundless energy. I'm also such a light sleeper that a wasp walking on the window pane will wake me. It's not that I don't enjoy rest, I guess I'm just one of those people who resist the temptations of the "seductress pillow" to the last. But I greatly enjoyed the read. Peace and light brother.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It's a very well written poem.
Great write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashwin Shanker

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much Mallishka
A unique title and poem on the subject of sleep and the pillow. Kudos.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ashwin Shanker

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the summary bro :P
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Much obliged bro

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Ashwin Shanker
Ashwin Shanker

Calicut, Kerala, India



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I am 25 years old, copywriter working at Mullen Lowe Lintas Group, Mumbai. I love writing and have been doing the same since six-years-old. I am a huge fan of communities of writers who support eac.. more..

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