New Moon.

This is (in my words) Bella's journey through New Moon. When she finds comfort in Jacob but will always love Edward. She will follow Edward and Jacob will follow Bella...

If the night fades away
That'd be okay
Maybe it'd be easier that way

You'll follow.
I'll run.

Can I wake up from this nightmare
Maybe he'll be there
But in your arms, I'm here

You'll follow.
I'll run.

This hole gets deeper the more I dig
Feelings I thought I hid
But your heart is too big

You'll follow.
I'll run.

He's the Eclipse to this »New Moon«
Apologies, I gave in too soon
He walks to my doom

He ran
I followed.
You...stayed.
(sure,sure)

©2009 Shanise Jones

Reviews

[Nicole Adams]

This is a clever poem, love it. I don't know much about how to write poetry so I might not be good with constructive criticism but I'll tell you what I like- I think this poem is clever because of your choice of words and the mindset of the persona. In the story Bella and Edward love each other unconditionally and Bella will follow Edward anywhere he goes even if it means losing her life. I think you have captured that in this poem beautifully.

Can't wait to read more x