At the waters edge

At the waters edge

A Poem by Shane Patrick C.

Meet me at the waters edge, where our worlds collide
Take my hand and I'll tell you what I feel inside
After all the things you said, I still question why
How strong I am to stand, and throw away my pride
Knowing I found love at your side
But if you doubt my words, look into my eyes
A warm place where my love can never hide
In this world I live, but with you I am alive

© 2011 Shane Patrick C.


Author's Note

Shane Patrick C.
Might be done, Might add more, Might change. Just a start i guess.

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I love how fluid your rhyming is, I like the emotion expressed, and it's really a great read...my favorite lines are "After all the things you said, I still question why
How strong I am to stand, and throw away my pride"...really great, nice work :D

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Shane Patrick C.
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I'm 24. Recovering drug addict. Going to school for music production. I write cause I enjoy it and it helps sometimes. Its more for me than anyone else. But I've been told that I should get my work ou.. more..

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