Green Eye's

Green Eye’s

Your thin hand held in mine.

I would hold you all time,

Your soft skin, pale as snow.

All of my feelings you know,

I just want to see, you and me.

And look into those eyes, brilliant green.

They’re the color of, fresh viridity.

 

There are things I need to say to you, words that my mind seems to vex,

Looking down an unknown road, the kind of fear you can’t confess.

That you scare me to death,

And you take away my lifeless breath.

That so easily you could crush me to the ground till there’s nothing left.

For a while there is not reply, not a word and I must dry my eyes.

And the words you say, take away all of my worry and all of my strife,

 “I would do anything to never lose you in my life”

I’d been laying on clichés,

Thinking who could ever really love me.

And now I’m ready to wait,

For when we can share our love and it is no longer in debate.

 

Don’t look too far,

I know at times I can seem so bizarre,

I hope that doesn’t make you hesitate,

And think of me as second rate because here,

All of my words I will translate.

And put under your pillow as we are laying there.

I find I am lucky, to love one who loves me,

I find I am so happy, to trust someone, who trusts me.

Reviews

[Misty Blue Eyes]

AWWW this was such a gret poem hun.. very very sweet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful and hopeful poem of love. A wise person know when they have it good. A very good ending to a excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[J. Marc]

It's great to see that people are still able to write such wonderful words! It's fresh and fells like spring! I particularly loved the last paragraph.....it is a mix of clever innocence and romantic realism!

[Gomer LePoet]

This is very well spoken and delivers the thoughts of all us young and old men when it comes to matters of the heart. That special someone that defines us beyond our comfort zone so to bring a little fear of ourselves. great piece Shane

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

beautiful

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Man! You have fallen! Great job! I honestly love this! She's gonna love it dear. I'd let her see it soon! I think you've finally found your bliss dear. Hold on to her.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

HaHo,
Nice poem of love and devotion. Thanks for sharing your poem with me.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to way to tell some one what they mean to you. It shows the personal private moments that are simple and loving.

[iamkim]

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem that's full of love :) Lucky Kayla!

[Dragon]

This is too good to be true. You really know your stuff don't you? Amazing mind you have! :)