Secrets

Secrets 

What is viewed is not seen.

What is said is not heard.

What is felt is not remembered.

It is all hidden,hidden behind the wall.

She smiles in her pain.

Laughs even in agony.

But she cries,she always cries,

and always dies,when hiding behind the wall.

Oh, the safety of the wall.

You may give, but will not be accepted.

You may ask, but will not be given.

You may bond, but you will live alone.

You may enter, but not with heart in tow.

You may leave, but take nothing with you.

She is the broken little doll,who lives

                      behind the wall.

Woe,to the broken little doll.

Author's Note

a poem for my best friend ever, i feel she is hiding allot of feelings from the world for fear of being hurt.

Reviews

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I understand this completly. It makes me feel like crying..(if i cried, which i dont) i can relate too your best friend tell her/him i knnow what its like and sometimes u have to let someone in to leave the pain behind the fear will live in you but u fight everyday someone says they care

[Poetry Girl]

i dont know why, but something about this poem makes me really like it. good word choice and well written. you really show shes hiding. i liked it so much, im going to favorite. great job

[KaySea]

very nice. a job well done

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

oh, very nice, but true, many people are hurt, and true friends are always there with arms open, nice job

[Liza]

awww this is so moving
i enjoy when others dedicate a write to another
to try to understand or emphathize with another's pain

[Jonathan De Elvira]

And she is fragile little doll...
take a good care of her....

[Miss Coral]

This was vividly emotional.. the repetition wasn't overdone, and the flow was very smooth. Nice job. c:

-Coral-

[Ashley]

i think this is one of your best. it flows increadable well and if fantastically gripping. well done

[Robin]

that was a great description of how a secretive heart can destroy itself , living in the fear of being hurt .

[the_stoic]

"you may bond , but you will live alone" .. a stark reality ! your best friend isn't the only one .. cause this world just goes to weaken those who are already in tethers . the simile was good too . keep writing