How To Make The Emotion Of Love

a scientific stand on love, then the unknown aspect of love.

How to make the emotion of love

 

SCIENCE

 You take a little testosterone

Drop in some Estrogen,

These chemicals are denizen in the human body

 With the right amount of dopamine

And a pinch of norepinephrine, 

Mix the serotonin, and the oxytocin,

And last but not least vasopressin, to tame the beast.

 

UNKNOWN

Tell her how you feel,

Know that these feelings are real.

Wait for a response

Try to seem nonchalant

Kiss her once,

Hold her twice.

Play it cool,

Treat her right.

And last but not least,

When loves increased,

Lay next to her and hold her thrice.

Author's Note

its short, but i wanted to make something different, hopr yall liked it.

Reviews

[Ashley]

i like the last stanza best, the others i'm not fussed on. they all flow very well and i think its good that you have done something different. well done

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I LOVE THIS~! the biology of love curved around the essence of love~ a delightful circle you've created here~

[Miss Coral]

Super unique.. interesting. Nice write. c:

[Angelauthor1204]

I love the poem, Makes me think that love is not always scientific. SCIENCE made me laugh. This is probaly not your best but it sure is good.

[Coyote Poetry]

To describe and figure out love would need many pages. love and life is a surprise sometimes. Never know what will happen in the next moment. I like your description. I believe you need luck and great patience to create love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[loowzerX]

this is very original :)

[Jonathan De Elvira]

loved it lol...

I'll take the "unknown" tips though :P

[Cynthia]

That's a nice poem!
I love this!
And when you tell this as science, it's kind of new and funny, and that's a good poem!

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very interesting....Makes you understand why scientist are so nerdy!!