How To Make The Emotion Of Love

a scientific stand on love, then the unknown aspect of love.

How to make the emotion of love

 

SCIENCE

 You take a little testosterone

Drop in some Estrogen,

These chemicals are denizen in the human body

 With the right amount of dopamine

And a pinch of norepinephrine, 

Mix the serotonin, and the oxytocin,

And last but not least vasopressin, to tame the beast.

 

UNKNOWN

Tell her how you feel,

Know that these feelings are real.

Wait for a response

Try to seem nonchalant

Kiss her once,

Hold her twice.

Play it cool,

Treat her right.

And last but not least,

When loves increased,

Lay next to her and hold her thrice.

Author's Note

its short, but i wanted to make something different, hopr yall liked it.

Reviews

[J. R.]

Very clever take on the concept of love.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I do like it. Very good.

[Brittany]

Awesome and unique. I love it.

[KaySea]

impressive

[Cheryl J. Turner]

Beautiful and clever. Well thought out and wonderfully written.

[Shay33]

Nice. :) It's clever and different. Refreshing.
Keep 'em coming.

[Carolina Kel]

I would say you achieved your goal trying to make something different.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

very good, nice job

[Robin]

I like it , good job

key thought - "Know that these feelings are real "

[Dan Ryoma]

I liked it. I think "in the human body" should be a new line. Along with 'and the oxytocin' and 'vasopressin, to tame the beast.' I also thought 'hold her thrice' seemed a bit awkward. Not incredibly, just a little. Despite this, I got the rhythm of the poem and liked it a lot.