How To Make The Emotion Of Love

a scientific stand on love, then the unknown aspect of love.

How to make the emotion of love

 

SCIENCE

 You take a little testosterone

Drop in some Estrogen,

These chemicals are denizen in the human body

 With the right amount of dopamine

And a pinch of norepinephrine, 

Mix the serotonin, and the oxytocin,

And last but not least vasopressin, to tame the beast.

 

UNKNOWN

Tell her how you feel,

Know that these feelings are real.

Wait for a response

Try to seem nonchalant

Kiss her once,

Hold her twice.

Play it cool,

Treat her right.

And last but not least,

When loves increased,

Lay next to her and hold her thrice.

Author's Note

its short, but i wanted to make something different, hopr yall liked it.

Reviews

[Author Rucha Joshi]

SCIENTIFICALLY LOVELIABLE.
You catched exact correct notations, excellent poem

[NinjaPi]

I love the science termenology but that bit does not flow easily. I can see how hard it would be to make those very unpoetic words flow like poetry but I think you could do it

[Poetry Girl]

aww i really liked this. i enjoyed the first part becuase it was like you were making a love potion :) and the 2nd part was like how to keep that love. very lovely poem. im favoriting

[FlawedByDesign]

hehe ... This is very interesting :)
I have to be honest, the names of some of the chemicals are tongue twisters and not very suited for poem, but it can be forgiven in this poem, as they are there to get a point across and that they do.

Good job.

[Senseless whatever]

Very good write. Liked the second stanza the best. Keep writing.

[Pax Analog]

Good sensible mix of subjective and objective values.

Adds a dash of amusement and clarity to the mating dance.

Chemisty + calm care equals alchemy beyond compare.

[Matthew Kult]

Unique. The second part is the best part of the poem. Short maybe but it flowed great had real emotion. excellent read. Good work

[Nina Kari]

ok i love this! awesome!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Unique Different But very sweet and beautiful love it. God bless Thanx for Sharing my friend

[Nova]

This was really sweet. I liked it a lot. Very different kind of piece but it was good.