Another one

workout poem

I pump,

And lift the iron up

Pain in my arms like no other.

My muscles tear

My body wears

Sweat pours

I let out a roar

I shout as I lift

Pumping my fist

Another one!

My heartbeat runs

I burn like the sun!

Another one!

Author's Note

i say this while i am working out to force me to continue

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like it, it's something different. Nice!

[nono]

wow...something completely different, that's expressing something completely new!

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I can feel the pain even though i'm not doing anything. You are a very good writer.

[alan peter kelly]

Yes...a positive affirmatioin...i do some training and understand this poem...focus in the gym, as with all endeavours, is important...i will read more of your writes...

[Ashley]

it doesnt flow so well but its not so much a poem as it is and encouraging chant

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

ahhhh SWEEEET endorphins pumping!!!~ kickboxing makes me surge the same way completely drenched in adrenalin!!~ excellent composite of the body on a workout high!!! loved this!~

[Jonathan De Elvira]

god damn!! stop forcing urself man!! :P

man, I wouldn't do tht one bit...
nice description bout painful workin out tho...
talented writer u r...:O

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

made me hurt just reading it lol but still a good work out Poem Just don't work your self too hard and Pull a muscle them Hurt ouchy But great work here.

[Angel Veselinov]

Good Piece nice way to make yourself pump it :)

[Inci]

that's nice...truly a workout poem