A Long Drop And A Sudden Stop

lol cooked dis one up after repo

A Long Drop And A Sudden Stop

 

Watchen your weight,

Wishen you were still twenty eight.

Bitchen bout polotics,

Try’in not to be an alchoholic.

Old grudges,

Past loven.

Sometimes I wonder why it bothers us all.

Payin bills,

Poppin pills,

Sometimes I wonder why we  just don’t get with it!

Cause we all wind up in alittle pine box,

With a kinda long drop,

And a sudden stop!

Author's Note

the grave robber to me is the best character ever in a rock opera, i wish i was him lol, and i wish he would read this lol

Reviews

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Hmm... is this what all adults sound like lol i don't agree on that, this is like half of the Nation that has problems and don't want to make a change and thinks Negitively about every thing i am sorry but thats what i think life has put me down so many raods and paths i stay on one and Enjoy life cause we only get one chance and i don't mean partying your life away thanks for sharing even though it did sound like that whole worlds complants and them rabbling and complaining about their problems lol. tc God bless

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oohh the sarcasm drips ike nectar with a twist of razorwire!~ ;)~ much enjoyed~

[Carolina Kel]

Middle age American given literary form here, or so it seems to me.

[r]

Haha. I think this is kinda funny, not sure why. But yeah, i liked this poem. Really good, hehe. haha.

~Cheezit~

[x]

Oh dear..
This is dreadful..a living death really. Not so much a grave robber as a grave maker.
The write is sad, bitter and doesn't give anything at all..

But..perhaps that was the intention..to sledge the reader and stamp on their throat while they're down....sorry but..

Thanks...no thanks.

[Brandon]

this was a fantastic poem great work keep it up



100/100

[Jonathan De Elvira]

cool, good resemblance of the grave robber XD
Although this poem sounds more realism and not to mention it is more related to most adults respectively..:)

[Brittany]

Awesome. That's all I got to say

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is great.