Blayders original short Prologue.

A new story by me obviously this is completely new and has not been preconceived.

War

The long haired warrior lifted his tired head. His sword trembled in his pale hands.

"What are you waiting for boy?" Asked the neatly groomed man who held his Sabre blade calmly. He had a smug look upon his face and chuckled as he looked at the boys tattered clothing.

The empty battlefield was barren and dark. Smoke arose from the east, and explosions sounded off from the west. A gust of gentle and cool wind flew in between the man and the boy, a small army surrounded them.

"You dare to attempt to take my life? Don't you know who i am?" Asked the neatly dressed man, he wore the wardrobe of a high ranking military officer.

"A monster from the northern border. A beast sent to destroy my people." answered the very young boy, his large dao blade lifted into the air slowly.

"Foolish child. You know not, why i have raged this terrible assault?"The man then put his sword into its cover, he walked over to the boy and knelt down on one knee.

"Your people are ignorant to our peoples ways, my army will take your heathens and turn them into humans beings such as myself." Said the man happily as he stood up.

"YA'LL ARE'NT HUMAN! You are all monsters!" Shouted the boy charging at the man, but before his blade could even touch the man he was knocked out by the hilt of the mans blade.

The boy dropped to the ground, he looked at the man who stood like a giant above him.

"Take him to my home." Said the man.

"Sir?" Asked one of his soldiers.

"I will raise him with my son, as if he were my own." The soldiers eyes were widened with disbelief.

"Thats an order second lieutenant!" The man shouted,

"SIR!" Shouted the lieutenant quickly as he picked the boy up.

The man then looked out to the distant battlefield, the blood, the chaos, the raging tanks, and the rolling thunder of grenades being thrown across trenches. 

Author's Note

it is a fantasy time periode, but i am trying to decide names and military rank of the old man.
if this is perceived well, i will make a book about the rest of this journey lol.

the story is now up! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/shaneberry/583919/

Reviews

[Cristal Bridges]

Wow this is unique, how it goes from something like Legend of the Seeker to modern day war. That's a very interesting take on a piece. I love fantasy stuff like Legend of the Seeker so I am very interested to see where this story goes. :)

[Jack Inthebox]

This is very interesting with great vivid details, I would very much like to see this story further developed for the entire world which it is in to be constructed, you have a grand beginning here buddy :)