The New Dream

i believe this is the final dream of her i will have for a while...i don't know if i hope this...or if it is just so...

The Final Dream Of Her

standing on a cliff side, sunset looking out at the ocean, she is standing closer to the edge than i.

a gust of wind blows as i ask,

"hey, Alexa, were is the most beautiful place in Hawaii?"

she laughs lightly, then walks over to me, her cat like physique taunting my dreaming mind.

"Papohaku Beach, west of Molokai. why do you ask?" she answers.

i again look out to the ocean.

"i don't agree." i said, very formally.

she then walks over and leans against me softly.

"where do you think the most beautiful place in Hawaii is?" she asked softly.

i turn my head to look at her eyes, 

"Hazel," i said.

"what?" she asks confused.

"here, this is the most beautiful place, the most beautiful time,but only if you are here." i said turning to her, i try to hold her but as i do she turns to dust, i fall into my steps. 

i look out to the ocean now alone, and i feel that this is a hateful, redundant place to stand...

as the ocean hits the sand it creates the same hazel color that was hiding in her eyes.

but now i cannot see them, nor can i bare to think...

not gone from this world but gone from me, borders and cities and states away, i listen to a jazzy tune, a Jupiter jazz that lets me think of her without remorse or regret..

a rhythmic saxophone tune 

i look at the moon and know that she could be looking at the same one too.. 

Author's Note

i believe this is the final dream of her i will have for a while...i don't know if i hope this...or if it is just so...

Reviews

[J.N.R.]

agreed. nice flow.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

A real nice flow to the feeling of the story and good choice of words.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Marlena]

Hmm...the informal way you wrote this is kind of refreshing. I liked it.

[Nina Kari]

Whoa, loved it. Sad, but with a hint of hope in there.
"as the ocean hits the sand it creates the same hazel color that was hiding in her eyes." that was my favorite line. Just frinkin Fantastic

[TTBoy28]

What a beautiful beginning to a beautiful ending! You made me see everything - and that is fantastic!

[Ashley.M.E]

This is really good a really sweet story.