bohémien lulaby

i have recently found out alot of people hated the hunchback of notre dame, but it is personally my favorite non-lion king disney film! it has many seriouse messages that ppl wouldnt want to hearabout

feu d'amour

refroidissez la lumière froide

bohémien lulaby

fille de bohémien

incendie du désir

cheveux de corbeau

yeux marron profonds

la danse dans la nuit

Translation-

fire of love

cool down cold light

gypsy lullaby

gypsy girl

burning desire

raven hair

deep brown eyes

dancing in the night

Author's Note

I LOVE THOND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what do yall think of this poem? and hell what do yall think of the movie? if you havent seen it i think everyone should! lol it is not hokey or dumb in any way, very dark and romantic for disney lol!

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Shane,

While the French translation of you poem is interesting, it is your English poem that is of real interest. That is were you shine and I would concentrate primarily on that. The English poem is very solid work. I can feel the passion of this piece and it is very nicely executed. High marks.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Cristal Bridges]

This is nice. I loved Disney's Hunchback of Notre' Dome. I think it's simple but lovely! And yes I do think you're right it was a bit dark for Disney. Nice poem. I think the descriptions of Esmerelda are fantastic.

[Randy`s Princess]

Ok hunchback of notre dame fair enough nice write

[Ecnelis]

I am an extreme fan of the hunch back of notre dome. From the book to the disney movie to the german musical of the disney movie to the french adaptation of the book into a musical. Looove it.

Aaaaand, I loooooove this poem. The short lines with a choppy rhythm that speak so... ugh! I really like this.

[snapjack]

Loved it! I think you got the punctuation right, but what do I know. I took french in high school and didn't pay much attention in the second class but good job! :)

[Ruth]

I love this poem!
You have taken a lot and made it powerfully concise love!
Excellent flow and I adore it, not much more to say lol
xx

[Stammers]

Very sexual too. It's my favourite, and only when you watch it back do you realise the quality of the songs in it, they could be in a musical.

I liked the poem, you conveyed a lot with very little.

[Legion]

I like the description of the girl in this. Very captivating.

[Arctic Fox]

not many people would take the time to analyze disney

[ShaneBerry]

i know it is kindof chopy, and idk if i got the words right in the translation... pleas tell me if i made any horrible mistakes lol idk any French grammar lol