Aerobiosis

Life

Aerobiosis 

with a breath of air,

a flame will flair.

from the waters womb bare,

we rise.

we walk,

on the earths hard rock.

we dance,

in the air.

naked bodies,

heads of hair.

we fight,

with the deadly might.

we talk,

to unlock.

our origins of flight.

we write...

because we want to create.

Author's Note

idk if it is any good what do yall think?

Reviews

[Legion]

It is amazing that we as a species has survived this long. I like this piece with it's description of the rise of life and its end result. Nicely done.

[Ruth]

I think so! lol
We all need to hold onto that passion!
Great poem
xx

[NinjaPi]

its intereting. i feel a theme of why writers write or more specifically poets. i may not be on to dance around naked or other wise but my imagination does.