The Visitor

while i as watching a ghost hunters episode, i realized how rude it must seem to ghosts when they go up into the attic or abandon house and uproot their privacy... I DO NOT BELIEVE IN GHOSTS.

The Visitor

Three hundred years ago I died,

it was a warm summer eventide.

The leash rapped round my neck,

My mind an emotional wreck.

Last year entered the peeress,

in a long, shiny blue dress.

She cried tears,

and I whipped them away.

We talked,she was not afraid.

But she is gone, 

no more,

now you are here?

With your radio,

and camera gear?

Who are you to invade my home?

To call me out,

and claim your own.

You threaten,

or offer,

how can you help?

to Save me from this cage my hand hath dealt?

I throw and a shout, but you just smile,

you say you will leave in “a little wile”

whats your rush? 

You wanted to see,

is this not cruel irony?

My whole life I was ignored, 

until my mortal body was no more!

Author's Note

i say i dont believe, but i guess it could be possible, i just think that if they were real they would have let me know along time ago lol,

any ways, what did yall think?

Reviews

[ca.shorty]

Nice! And I don’t really believe ghost are dead people according to my religion they are demons. So people shouldn’t mess with ghost cause your really messing with demons. And actually when you think your messing with demons they’re actually messing with you. It’s not worth it. Anyways I watch ghost adventures it good show,

[SamBug]

Great ending. Great write! :) I enjoyed it a lot

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good ending to the poem. I like how you led the reader to the strong ending. Ghost are with us. I believe we are less important to them then them to us. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[FireWoman]

For being a non-believer, you hit the nail on the head with this.

[Katie]

I really enjoyed this poem, it flowed really well, and I love the concept behind it. Well done!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

So far, your best poem.
:)

[DK6]

It's a nice story, I personally have experienced the paranormal, so I believe in it firmly, the story was amazing, spot-on wording, thanks for sharing. :)

[Albatross]

This is well written, the flow of conciousness simply dances. I really enjoyed how your 'ghost' seemed to explore his memories of his past life before turning his mind to accuse his intruders. The only error that I could find was that you spelled 'rapped' instead of 'wrapped' in the third line. Excellent job:)

[KatiePie]

eek >w< Ghosts
Gorgeous imagery I must say, I really did love reading this :D

-Cathrine

[Randy`s Princess]

oooh now I dont believe in ghosts either but I`ve seen enough stuff to convince me they do exist but this is a good discription of ghosts well thought out maybe you should watch X files or Most Haunted or The Third Kind that`s a good film :)