Fighting

Fighting

Crowds gather 

Empty space in he middle

Throwing fights,

Cracking down

Take down

Brawling

Smashing

Thrashing

Fighting

With one notion

One word said wrong

Starts a battle,

Ten minutes long

Five minnutes in,

Your enemy is your

Best friend,

Throw a fist

And he’ll throw back

Dodge it once and flip back,

Everyone stares as you,

Take your stance

All the training in the world

You still wanna dance?

Cause ill take you down

With every punk in town.

fighting

Author's Note

fighting!!! lol came up with this one while i was practicing Aikido lol

Reviews

[Ruth]

Raw and passionate hon!
If only we could only fight together in a peaceful manner then we would see the light!
Great piece
xx

[Nina Kari]

niiiiiiice. this is great

[Inci]

good flow... well done

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. Even flow and expressive.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

Nice flow to the words.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[SimplyDisastrous]

I love this. Excellent write, Shane! (:

[Marlena]

I liked it, but you should fix up some of the grammar, it gets a little confusing.

[James Watts]

The adrenaline rush is like a drug. I spent the majority of my youth in one fight or another. I was drawn to it. I weened myself away, along with other harmful elements once my son was born. But I remember those days.

[Poetic Beauty]

this sounds so very true. With only words an all out brawl can start and before you know you hit your friend when they try to stop you. lol Sounds like some scenes I have witnessed outside or inside of bars before when people have drank too much. great creative write. Haven't read a poem like this one yet.

[Rhine Wolf]

now this i did enjoy!! great imagery love the flow of it!!

Blessed be,
Fallon