Digital Disaster

Digital Disaster 

Typing fast, then typing slow.

Energy drink, to make you go,

Faster and faster time  stops still!

A digital disaster,

The master was killed.

An addiction

A fix

Another dimension!

   Escape the pain and run, run away,

Find a way to save for the day, go to sleep, wake up faster,

Type, type, type!!

You little human b*****d!

You need me you know!

In time it will show! 

Your addiction for me will

Grow, grow, grow!

Faster and Faster, time stops still!

A digital disaster,

The Master was killed.

The servant pulls,

The tri-pod plug,

The computer stops, the room grows dim…

…he turns on his cell phone, AND IT STARTS AGAIN!

Author's Note

lol freaked my sister out with this one lol she is addicted to the comp!!!

Reviews

[krys1]

I love this

[Silent Siren]

This is quite an innovative poem, if I may say so. It addresses a very latent issue modern society is facing.

Good job in capturing the essence of the addiction!

[Desert Dreamer]

Addiction to our electronic devices has caused us to become slaves to the computer...sometimes we must turn them off and walk away.

[Lady Celery]

I liked this one a lot! I had to read it twice through :) I thought it was really clever and I thought that it was good to point out how much we "need" electronic devices and all that. I loved the flow and the rhyming that you used in this poem; it worked really well in this case. Nice work!

[Ian Faraway]

I defiantly enjoyed this, the tension, speed, and the horror of how much we need electronics these days.... I actually sang this out in my mind :D

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

This was really enjoyable. I loved the speed of it and how as you read you're almost becoming addicted to the pace and all that is going on in the poem as well. Great job!
~LW

[the_stoic]

digital disaster !! apt title ! enjoyed the write

[Rhine Wolf]

lol!! this was fun to read!! it is so true we do end up becoming slaves to our own designed. brilliantly inked!!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[Elizabeth]

This is quite accurate... love the last line.

[NinjaPi]

Nice. I feel you but its this web site not games for me.