Digital Disaster

Digital Disaster 

Typing fast, then typing slow.

Energy drink, to make you go,

Faster and faster time  stops still!

A digital disaster,

The master was killed.

An addiction

A fix

Another dimension!

   Escape the pain and run, run away,

Find a way to save for the day, go to sleep, wake up faster,

Type, type, type!!

You little human b*****d!

You need me you know!

In time it will show! 

Your addiction for me will

Grow, grow, grow!

Faster and Faster, time stops still!

A digital disaster,

The Master was killed.

The servant pulls,

The tri-pod plug,

The computer stops, the room grows dim…

…he turns on his cell phone, AND IT STARTS AGAIN!

Author's Note

lol freaked my sister out with this one lol she is addicted to the comp!!!

Reviews

[Legion]

lol Sounds like my muse when it's having a bad day. Nicely done.

[.SaveSydney!.]

Haha; I found myself really getting into this one, and reading faster and faster..
Great job!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Haha, this piece is definitely creative. I do love the flow, and the way it reads faster and faster. (: Great write!

[Ruth]

Blimey! lol This is excellent, a poetic high speed chase! lol
The flow to this is mesmerising! Truly wonderful write love, addiction at its best! lol
xx

[Inci]

i made a similar poem too.see if u like it ... it's called virtual reality

[HighBrowCulture]

postmodern theme.

like nitroglycerin under a bridge full of parked cars.

with families grilling hotdogs over the hood, smiling

smiling

smiling

but

its all plastic anyway, all plastic-

[Ashimoto]

I agree, the virtual world is addictive. That's why I try not to get on the computer that much. Good poem.

[Inci]

nice poem..and that's true ..this virtual world is addictive

[Tea And A Cheshire Smil..]

Aha, this sure was fun to read. Well written poem ^^ and so true!

[Paul]

It's all true. The technology today are becoming our rulers and we are its slaves. Sad, but true. Very well written with a lot of emotion. I love it!