Digital Disaster

Digital Disaster 

Typing fast, then typing slow.

Energy drink, to make you go,

Faster and faster time  stops still!

A digital disaster,

The master was killed.

An addiction

A fix

Another dimension!

   Escape the pain and run, run away,

Find a way to save for the day, go to sleep, wake up faster,

Type, type, type!!

You little human b*****d!

You need me you know!

In time it will show! 

Your addiction for me will

Grow, grow, grow!

Faster and Faster, time stops still!

A digital disaster,

The Master was killed.

The servant pulls,

The tri-pod plug,

The computer stops, the room grows dim…

…he turns on his cell phone, AND IT STARTS AGAIN!

Author's Note

lol freaked my sister out with this one lol she is addicted to the comp!!!

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

This is great, and funny. Good job

[X]

hahaha! very nice!!! i loved the rhyming man, and how at the end the Comp' switches to a celly, BEAUTIFUL!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I know her feeling. I lose power often. A digital disaster if you are writing. I learn to write into a book then the computer. A safety factor. I like the poem. I know the feeling of your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Senseless whatever]

LOL liked the ending. I was thinking text then you pulled the computer plug and blam there it is!

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

Funny how we treat our afflictions. Some are small and most are too grand to imagine. Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

Pity you haven't made all the text green and had a black back drop like the matrix :P
Other than that don't have much to criticize. Mind you I think AND IT STARTS AGAIN should get it's own line...

I'm a gamer and I like to stay in touch with people via the net, so I can relate to it on a personal level. The computer is just a tool though so even if your poem illustrates it having some power over it's master, I can turn it off just as easily as I can turn it on, I'm in control here!!! Or at least I like to think I am ;)

:L

[Angelphires]

lol. omg...I can totally relate this to me playing videogames. lol

[SimplyDisastrous]

I LOVE this poem!! It's, like, my FAVORITE poem right now!! :D Thank you for writing this. (:

[Nina Kari]

great write, i myself have a hard time getting away from the computer. this was great keep it up dude your work is fantastic!

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

I am too addicting to the pc. Wouldn't know what to do without it :P. Great write!!