Red Dawn

One hero dies, another must rise!

Red Dawn

One hero dies,

Another will rise.

Like the phoenix,

From the ash.

Two destinies,

Must clash.

The blade,

Is drawn.

At the mornings,

Red dawn.

Author's Note

Hmmmm, What do Ya'll think?

Reviews

[J. Marc]

Alright! It is direct and I like it.

[Rose Tyler]

I love this - It paints a good imagery for the reader.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Short, sweet, and vivid. Wonderful.

[heich]

nice..the words were vivid..

[Senseless whatever]

Short but to the point. Well written.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

Dog's of War! Kind of feel from this poem.
Life and Light!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[Dakota]

True words.

[JaceJordd]

it reminds me of harry potter and how the pheonix dies and then is reborn from the ashes

[Angelphires]

I like it. It's simple to read, and yet it feels like its hiding a dramatic story behind the words.

[Nina Kari]

short yet to the point i love it.
"One hero dies,
Another will rise." love those lines