The Cruel Angels' Theses

The Cruel Angels' Theses

A Story by ShaneBerry
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In one night i thought of this while watching the movie "neon genisis Evangelion" and i thought of all of these real thing that have gone unnoticed, but the last one is just for fun i hope you enjoy!!

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Cruel Angel Thiesis   
THIS IS THE DOCUMENT OF HUMAN LIFE THROUGH THE EYES OF A HUMAN. PT.1
I. mans greatest enemy is himself,man is the basis of all destruction...in the 10000yrs of its domestication,man has done nothing but destroy,so he, it can...not evolve,as many may put it,but adapt.(the difference is small though.)we see ourselves as the top of the spiecies ladder,yet,give us a little heat(5degreese hotter for example)and we wither...cool us off with an ice age,and we'd freeze.while other "animals" as we so easily call them,have alredy prepared ...
we use the word...humainity...when somthing terrible is happining...but we see humans as a sighn of life.is that not what is called irony,or is that word(humanity)so abstractly defined? or humaine treatment to  an "animal",is this not possible?for a creature that is not man,can not ever be human . humain treatment can only br givin to humans,there is no word i am aware of that states that the best treatment torwards any spiecies(animal,viral,plant,or yes human)is bieng given. 
II. man greatest fears what he does not understand...for example,a young child of the homo-saipiene persuasion,looks into a dark room,one he has just been in,and will not enter, no he is not mentaly retarded,he is perfectly functioning,humans are a DURINEAL, spiecies. meaning they sleep at night, and live durring the day.just like all great apes.
but unlike any other(non-domesticated) spiecies man has what is called phobias,this is when a homo-saipiein is truely,deathly afraid of somthing...it is truely unknown why we are the only creatures on this planet to have this function.
possibly one of the only things we should be afraid of is somthing that we use every second of every day,untill the second we die and under stand very little of... the MIND,with it giant worlds are created,and stories formed,but it can also be used as a weapon for destruction,rather than a tool of creation... every creature on the planet has one,(it is not specified in the plants,and viruses in the animal kingdom,but still is a possibility), and every creature uses it,even in a vegitated state, an organisim can react useing the mind.rapest,petifiles,murderers,terrorist,saintist,cult leaders and dictators(includeing presidents,kings/queens,and dukes.)all have mindes,and use them for evil,terrible,discusting things...but think it,(useing the mind),as good...see it,(useing the mind), as justified.
III. mans greatest creation is the idea of a GOD...there is no god(or gods,godess,goddesses).there is only the sun the nine planets that suround it,and there placement, the rest...as they say...is history...
but man can hide his fear with its creation,god,it(she or he,)is the suposed creator of all life,bad or good,and he instills the practice of the "saintity"of life...that all life is in some form sacred,to me with my experiances,the saintity of life is an arcaic form of the zooalogical food web,that in the end we are all going to die,weather we are the wolf,or the blade of grass,we will all be consumed, weather we are the maggot,or the eagle.
but the idea of god,is as abstract as humanity itself,he can be as large as the universe,or as small as a soul.(the electron pulses in you're brain)he can be all things,or a gohst that seeks out sinners,he can be a common man that never lived,or a hermafrodite that has eight arms. thousands of descriptions,yet only 270 magor religions.
although man has no viable proof for the exsistance of god,three fourths of the total population belive that there is an all powerful diety of some kind.
IV. mans greatest fault is the creation of the first automatic weapon.....this made man weak, when not fitted with a gun or other auto-weapon.the thought process that was desighned behind the  gun,was the ease of kill. but man in his arrogence created his own destruction,because from the first auto-weapon,came more destructive meanse of  disaster,rockets,mines,and soon what is commonly called,the nucular bomb...this is to be speculated as mans greatest weapon,"its like unleashing a small porstion of the sun on an enamy."is what the creator of this weapon stated.and is recognized as one of the most dangerouse things ever created,and the possible undoing of man.with there power an entire landscape can be completely eratticated.
man sees it undoing as a possible salvation.when faced with an enemy,man always puts useing auto-weapons as a main priority.rather than the givin striength of the bieng. 
V. mans greatest friend.........is unknown
VI. mans greatest hope is the purity of the mind, by use of this complex combination of mental,and physical capacities to reform the body,this process is called the HUMAN INSTRAMENTALITY PROJECT,unlike the normal reference,this involves the closest thing that is,our final evolutionary leap.it is to take the future of mankind out of the hands of nature and into our own. by the finalization of the true mind is to unlock the parts of the brain that for an unknown cause are not active.it is estimated that the average human bieng only uses 9.99%of it brain.
the only evidence of the power produced by this unknowend part of the brain is in the case of autistic children,they can accumilate vast ammounts of knolage and are able to put it to uses that are only effected by the public.yet they do not use the parts of the brain we common people use. 
                                 SO,TO END THIS FIRST SECTION,I WILL GIVE MY FIRST THIESIS. 
I. mans greatest enemy man himself.
II. mans greatest fear is what he does not understand.
III. mans greatest creation is the idea of a deity.
IV. mans greatest fault is his ingenuity.
V. mans greatest friend is unknown.
VI. mans greatest and only hope is the human instrumentality project.

© 2010 ShaneBerry


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ShaneBerry
What do you all think? and also dont mind spelling mistakes its what i do.

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This is a very interesting piece. The whole thing makes you take a look at who you truly are as a person: what your beliefs are, are they real, etc. For me, some of these statements ring true, others, I'd feel inclined to challenge. But that is the beauty of life itself, no? To experience,to question, to put to the test, to understand. That is the beauty of being human.

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This is pretty interesting. I can see you have put a lot of thought into it. I think I remember the anime. Very thought provoking one. It was like ghost in the shell all over again. Anyway, leaving that aside I think you could put more substance into your statements. They are good, dont get me wrong. But the explanation so as to why you think that way needs to be specific.
For example:
man greatest fears what he does not understand
When I read this sentence the thesis for it, what i expected would have been something like 2012 theory. Man does not know what its all about so it consumes him in dread, or the Bermuda triangle even. Its unexplainable, so it causes fear. Or the lost city of Atlantis, the life on other planets, the un-comprehensible events. Or things as such.
Well this is what i thought. I hope I was some help. Then again, these were just my thoughts. You dont have to go by them if you think its not right.
Such elusive thoughts are subjective. They are never right or wrong. So people should not really pin point and degrade other people who think that way. =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lol well maby i do but thats just your opinion.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I do not agree with most of your ideas about humans. God does exist ad he created the very pineneedles you speak of. We do not only destroy though we do little good for our earth. I think you need a little counciling

Posted 14 Years Ago


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