THE BEST POEM IN THE WORLD

mabey poems arent for me lol

 finding a place that is near, i watch your steps, your voice i hear.

finding darkness for a second thought, this life we've shared,

the fights we've fought, the days we cared. 

and if we shall escape this dept,

and finally rest in our bed, 

ill know how bad my poems... suck!

Author's Note

it was supposed to suck lol xp

Reviews

[WriterMe]

Haha well the title didn't really fit. The first few lines were well worded but they weren't So bad. I'm sure you can write much better poetry. =]

[ShaneBerry]

wow realy? and yeah debt is what i ment.

It was supposed to suck, you say, but- it didn't.
Nice rhyming, you've got potential, you know.

[Andrew'sWonderland]

It's really not bad! Not every poem has to have a specific rhythm or flow. I love the message!! One question though, is dept supposed to be debt?