All So Real

New and different from the usual. :)

All so real

Bright lights
Is this right?
These things that I feel.
Pain in my body
That the drugs do not heal.

A light high,
A dim buzz,
A thought full of laugh!
Girl I want up on you,
when you're shaking your a*s!

All so real!
Love in my head,
Don't know if I'll hold ya,
In this hospital bed!


Will you try me?
Take me for a spin,
Let me try to love you,
unlike the other men.

You're sending dirty pictures,
Flirting in a skirt!
You don't see destruction,
At the center you hurt!

I try to make a move,
Take it up a notch!
But then you shoot me,
'cuz of troubles you have got!

All soo real!
Love that I feel!
A roller coster over,
The hill with no wheels!

Down in the dumps,
Lovely heart pumps,
Came here out of nowhere,
Your love on me has jumped!

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(C)2013 Shane berry -S.B.- F/A/B/A/P/F//3
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Author's Note

Miss being in real relationships :/

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

When you're married with children like old Al Bundy, these are the days you'll look back on with fond sighs.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words in the poem. Would be a good verbal poem. A lot of life and energy in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote