Second Best Open Secret

First poem in F/A/B/A/P/F2. Not really about anything recently but a familiar emotion we have all felt of unrequited love.

I came out the other side,

Did not win but at least,

I can say 'hey I tried."

 

I talked to everyone about,

What I cannot talk about.

Endless thoughts that I think,

With the lips making ships sink.

 

Some say,

Let it out,

And others, keep it in.

Circle cycle never end.

 

If you smash a diamond with a stone it will shatter,

lets make hearts of stronger matter.

tenacity, elasticity, just get it done,

Forging  hearts of illudium.

 

Tougher, rougher lover,

Never gonna love her.

Keep it simple keep it sweet,

Something else that you may fear,

Publicly displayed thoughts so dear.

 

Some say,

Stop talking,

Others say start blocking,

Every thought and everything

Having to do with that face.

 

If you smash a diamond with a stone it will shatter,

lets make hearts of stronger matter.

tenacity, elasticity, just get it done,

Forging  hearts of illudium.

 

Am I going way too fast?

Are my thoughts so unclear?

Forgetting about my past,

Just to have you near.

 

Nothing ever ends,

That’s how the story goes.

Unbreakable can bend,

And everybody knows!

 

Author's Note

First poem in F/A/B/A/P/F2. Not really about anything recently but a familiar emotion we have all felt of unrequited love.

P.S. Illudium is a fictional Element used for hypothetical Scientific stuff haha.

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This was pretty good. You have consistently have something awesome to share. Thank you for posting your thoughts to this site.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem.
"Tougher, rougher lover,
Never gonna love her.
Keep it simple keep it sweet,"
I like the many strong statements in the poem. Good to keep it simple and hope we land on our feet. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote